tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post1285130162870272852..comments2022-11-11T01:59:43.437-08:00Comments on B: And Let the Campaigning Begin!Rachel Beanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02558300529910254645noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-91587674088206818362011-09-15T13:41:03.625-07:002011-09-15T13:41:03.625-07:00Wow, great internal conflict going on here! I almo...Wow, great internal conflict going on here! I almost felt the anxiety your MC was going through. Nicely done!:)Amanda Milnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07582468814920761586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-91602530369029187282011-09-14T08:14:46.108-07:002011-09-14T08:14:46.108-07:00Hey! I've listed you a the recipient of the Ve...Hey! I've listed you a the recipient of the Versatile Blogger award and the Liebster award...I know you already received at least one of them, but your blog is great. You deserve it again! Details here: http://jessica-therrien.blogspot.com/2011/09/im-feeling-love.htmlJessica Therrienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08075397024734371669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-9802816421340854432011-09-13T20:16:59.094-07:002011-09-13T20:16:59.094-07:00Great job, rachel! The MC's inner conflict was...Great job, rachel! The MC's inner conflict was so human and real! It really made me feel for her and root for her at the same time!F.E. Sewellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04222968586032981217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-58441023288555942172011-09-12T15:42:07.958-07:002011-09-12T15:42:07.958-07:00Gosh, another completely different take from the s...Gosh, another completely different take from the same opening line. I love how you get so much story into this and I really like courtroom dramas.Claire Hennessyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16576410137759875223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-53944887572526087662011-09-10T16:47:30.182-07:002011-09-10T16:47:30.182-07:00Awesome idea, Rachel! This is a great entry. I lov...Awesome idea, Rachel! This is a great entry. I love how cozy we get inside your MCs head. Great inner dialogue.Christine Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08711726941768571495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-46798549972097936872011-09-09T17:13:30.929-07:002011-09-09T17:13:30.929-07:00@angelina: haha, thanks for supporting the cause ;...@angelina: haha, thanks for supporting the cause ;)Rachel Beanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02558300529910254645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-38279943790888181932011-09-09T14:09:58.016-07:002011-09-09T14:09:58.016-07:00So poignant! Well done. Had to push your follow bu...So poignant! Well done. Had to push your follow button. Always wanted to be someone's minion ^_^Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00769602845843608247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-81827314765807401052011-09-09T05:36:49.364-07:002011-09-09T05:36:49.364-07:00Whoops, here I thought I'd commented already. ...Whoops, here I thought I'd commented already. Good job, Rach - I'm totally dying to know what happened before the courtroom scene and whether he's going to get what's coming to him. :-DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-64513894550700562202011-09-08T17:58:10.305-07:002011-09-08T17:58:10.305-07:00I want to know what he did, and why he shot someon...I want to know what he did, and why he shot someone. nice job, mine is #72Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-60518586858824837522011-09-08T17:03:30.571-07:002011-09-08T17:03:30.571-07:00Great job! Tightly written with enough intriguing ...Great job! Tightly written with enough intriguing backstory to make me wonder what's really going on here.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17034419617457525778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-89279230781879334982011-09-08T14:10:02.530-07:002011-09-08T14:10:02.530-07:00I really empathized with your POV character. The h...I really empathized with your POV character. The heartbreak of a love gone wrong was very powerful. <br />The story itself feels like the middle of something bigger. I'd love to know more about the relationship, and what she does next - there could be an unexpected twist.Sylviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02913456656863545074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-45597135386640201352011-09-08T14:08:13.283-07:002011-09-08T14:08:13.283-07:00At the end, I was like, "Dun, dun, dunnnn!&qu...At the end, I was like, "Dun, dun, dunnnn!" :D Great work!Carrie Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01540590799406170410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-46516643131739915852011-09-08T12:32:09.974-07:002011-09-08T12:32:09.974-07:00great POV, now I have to know Kyle's fate.great POV, now I have to know Kyle's fate.prerna picketthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06207620652405474672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-72186527400716970482011-09-08T12:19:59.396-07:002011-09-08T12:19:59.396-07:00Wow, thanks for all of the comments! I was a littl...Wow, thanks for all of the comments! I was a little nervous when I saw how good every one else's postings were (me being a rookie and all), so thanks so much for all the encouragement!! :DRachel Beanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02558300529910254645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-42325382311083768872011-09-08T12:03:38.093-07:002011-09-08T12:03:38.093-07:00Awesome. I love that you start out thinking romanc...Awesome. I love that you start out thinking romance, or break-up, and then get to he killed a guy and you're all like Whaaa! Cool!Super Happy Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15322495551769344674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-77002197148361430792011-09-08T07:49:02.737-07:002011-09-08T07:49:02.737-07:00Rachel, great job. Yes, I got it. Yes I was suck...Rachel, great job. Yes, I got it. Yes I was sucked in and I'm feeling pretty mad at Kyle right now.Jill Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10427035187471994358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-43022742821483417022011-09-08T07:24:15.547-07:002011-09-08T07:24:15.547-07:00You used a great emotional line-up. Subtle tension...You used a great emotional line-up. Subtle tension that kept growing into something much bigger. Finely executed, Rachel! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-72856781667213790642011-09-08T07:21:56.507-07:002011-09-08T07:21:56.507-07:00Really enjoyed the tension in the story. It makes...Really enjoyed the tension in the story. It makes me want to know what happens next. Great entry.Patricia T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10673204828383998897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-82109154696935759592011-09-08T07:06:54.309-07:002011-09-08T07:06:54.309-07:00Great story! I'm dying to know what happens ne...Great story! I'm dying to know what happens next.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-64073954115138002262011-09-08T06:38:32.447-07:002011-09-08T06:38:32.447-07:00Great sense of conflict, both emotional and extern...Great sense of conflict, both emotional and external, in just 200 words!Lori M. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858438789496971734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-63500969689465542082011-09-08T06:32:58.922-07:002011-09-08T06:32:58.922-07:00Great job! I could really empathize with your MC, ...Great job! I could really empathize with your MC, and enjoyed the increasing tension throughout.lindyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02715499969607564911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-23416565164798148152011-09-08T06:01:50.268-07:002011-09-08T06:01:50.268-07:00Nice! I really like this--I can feel the MC's ...Nice! I really like this--I can feel the MC's conflict. Great job!Francesca Zappiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16876692064254806825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-65869205066982206012011-09-08T03:28:02.450-07:002011-09-08T03:28:02.450-07:00Wow, thanks for all the comments! :D
And Michelle...Wow, thanks for all the comments! :D<br /><br />And Michelle, Really?!?! Thank you!! I'll email you about it :)Rachel Beanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02558300529910254645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-56671183622640500392011-09-08T01:07:23.234-07:002011-09-08T01:07:23.234-07:00I love seeing all the different stories that have ...I love seeing all the different stories that have sprung from four simple words. This one was a very emotional, contemporary piece. I love how the protagonist still struggled with testifying, even though she knew Kyle was guilty and had lied to other girls - very realistic.Jocelyn Rishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141176507423961390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4692850990505834120.post-36015511090223876472011-09-08T01:00:12.797-07:002011-09-08T01:00:12.797-07:00Interesting, makes me want to know more :-)Interesting, makes me want to know more :-)Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.com